It's all been said before (two years ago, to boot) but still- oh my. This thing is brilliant.
The banter. The names assigned to them before Jack learns their names. The constant banter. The assumption that, of course, Jack is taking them back to his place. The fact that the whole thing remains in character all the way through.
And of course, the pondering on what the sex will be like...and then, of course, the penultimate paragraph.
In short- the whole thing is astoundingly awesome, and I am very, very glad I got the chance to read it. So thank you for writing and posting this whole thing for such people as I, who feel compeled to write an overly long comment...
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The banter. The names assigned to them before Jack learns their names. The constant banter. The assumption that, of course, Jack is taking them back to his place. The fact that the whole thing remains in character all the way through.
And of course, the pondering on what the sex will be like...and then, of course, the penultimate paragraph.
In short- the whole thing is astoundingly awesome, and I am very, very glad I got the chance to read it. So thank you for writing and posting this whole thing for such people as I, who feel compeled to write an overly long comment...